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Unwelcome Guests is the newest full-length collection of dark speculative poetry from SFPA Grand Master and Rhysling winner David C. Kopaska-Merkel

There’s relatability and strangehood in the offerings, some miniature in haiku, a beautiful symmetry and ominous obscurity in the text, dread in the unspoken.
Where some poets hero the impact of the closing line, Kopaska-Merkel’s poems strike in the power between the lines. The reader can never predict what potency the text might disgorge
Unwelcome Guests is a spectral lover’s touch—tender, yet dooming. It’s a perfect marriage of poetry and prose, warm and chilling, starkly intelligent and reachable.
Ideal for anyone.

--Eugen Bacon, Aurealis

At turns disquieting and quirky, playful and poignant, the poems in Unwelcome Guests, like their titular subjects, will stay with you long after you've put the book down and gone to bed (perhaps leaving the light on). A welcome addition to any genre poetry lover's collection!

--Marsheila Rockwell, Rhysling Award-winning poet and author of the Scribe Award-nominated Shard Axe series

The first half of Unwelcome Guests slithers in and out of side-alleys in Lovecraft’s Cthulhu Mythos, while the second strides avenues of science fiction. Gotta love “June Lockhart’s Recurring Nightmare”. And when “Medusa Buys a Car”. There’s so many environs of speculative poetry visited here, penned with a convincing voice and deft whispers of experimentation.

--Robert Frazier, author of Phantom Navigation

David Kopaska-Merkel’s poetry is like a twisted vein of black gold, with subtle tweaks of darkling humor. He brings to the fore other images that are like watching a glistening pool of oil, beneath which something moves. Whether disturbing sites near Carcosa, the unsuspecting traps of relationships, or unusual visitations, his poetry will inspire, entertain and make you think.

--Colleen Anderson, Rhysling Award winner

MERELY THE BUCKET LIST POEM (ON PAGE 79) IS WORTH THE ACTION ON MY MIND AND MY FUNNY BONES (MORE THAN ONE)

--Edward Mycue, Author of I Am A Fact Not A Fiction

To order a signed and numbered copy from the publisher:

https://weirdhousepress.com/products/unwelcome-guests-by-david-c-kopaska-merkel?_pos=1&_psq=kop&_ss=e&_v=1.0

You can get one directly from me, too ($18 postpaid). I also have PDFs for $3. PayPal to jopnquog [at] gmail [dot] com.
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https://dreamsandnightmaresmagazine.blogspot.com/2025/02/books-for-charity.html


Here is the deal. You send me a receipt, dated today or some day after today, showing that you contributed any amount of money to a non-profit that helps disadvantaged groups. This could be your local food pantry, Planned Parenthood, the Brigid Alliance, or any one of countless others. If you are not sure that I will approve of your donation, email me and ask.

When I receive the copy of the receipt from you I will email you a PDF of my 2019 dark speculative poetry collection The Ambassador Takes One For the Team, and my Elgin-winning 2022 collection, Some Disassembly Required. I have that one available in a variety of ebook formats. I'm sorry that I don't have ebooks of my 2024 dark speculative poetry collection from Weird House, entitled Unwelcome Guests
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https://dreamsandnightmaresmagazine.blogspot.com/2025/01/dreams-and-nightmares-129.html

The latest issue of a magazine publishing speculative poetry since 1986. The makes it the second oldest such magazine afaik. Interested in submitting or purchasing? See below:

I print primarily poetry, but also publish a small amount of short short fiction. The genres of fantasy and SF are preferred. I am interested in experimental formats and content, and prefer fantastic horror a la Lovecraft or Blackwood to the blood and gore type. Any SF or fantasy is appropriate if it isn't sappy or trite. If your poem rhymes, be sure that the rhymes are not forced, and that the meter is consistent.
The magazine consists of 24 digest-sized pages with card-stock cover. Publication (dead trees and PDF) is thrice yearly, issues are numbered sequentially. Issue #1 was published in January of 1986. Print run 120 (plus about 25 PDF). Most-recent issue is #129. DN is distributed free to interested libraries. Maximum length for poetry or fiction is 2 single-spaced typed pages, but I prefer less than one page. I prefer e-submissions in the body of the message. Buying 1st N.Am. serial rights unless stated otherwise. Payment is $15 on acceptance + a contributor's copy. (You can request 3 extra copies instead of cash.) I prefer to pay using PayPal. DN is a tough market because of the high volume of poetry submissions I receive. Fewer than 5% of submissions are accepted. Response time ~ 2-4 weeks. Sample copy for $5 (print) or $1 (pdf). Print subscriptions are $25 for 6 issues inside North America and $30 U.S. outside North America. Lifetime sub., with available back issues, for $90. Pdf copies $1 each. A lifetime pdf subscription, with all back issues, is $39. Checks should be payable to me. Subscribe with PayPal to jopnquog@gmail.com.
Artwork should be line drawings; no half-tones (although any color will be visible on digital copies). Good photocopies OK, but I prefer to receive JPEG's as e-mail attachments. Art will be printed no larger than 4 1/2 by 7 1/2 inches, but I can reduce it. Payment $15+1 copy, but $30+1 copy for (color) covers. I always need covers, and small filler illustrations. Filler illos that are the right size and shape to fill up the bottom of a page are particularly useful.
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Pig Pong


Charley was on the verge of winning his 100th game of pig pong. It was a grueling sport, but he had made it his own, by dint of countless hours of practice on his grandmother's pig farm. How he had sacrificed--foregoing the ice cream socials, Friday night dances, trips to the movie theatre, birthday parties, everything, all had been subsumed by his one goal. And it had all been worth it. Now, with pig pong declared the newest Olympic Sport, he was perfectly positioned for a gold medal next year at the Pyongyang games. All the name calling, clod throwing, glance casting scum bunnies from East Central High School would finally get their paybacks. But now, it was time to focus. Randi had just backhanded a big hairy sow low across the center of the net. Squealing, the pig bounced in the near-right quadrant and spun towards the outside corner. *Wack* ("Eeeeeeeeeee") Charley returned the hog, dropping it just on Randi's side of the net in his patented pigspin return. No point. It was his serve. He dropped the porker smartly for a good bounce and slammed it towards the white line just below Randi's navel. Yes, it took a big woman to play pig pong successfully, but Randi was no pig. There wasn't an ounce of fat on her 6'1" frame. She returned the swine to Charley's left corner. Return. Right corner. Return. Left corner. Return. He began to sweat. This was a long volley for pig pong. Usually either the table or the suid gave out by now. Good thing they weren't playing a boar. Right. Return. Left. Return. Right. Return. Sweat poured down Charley's face. Randi was indeed a worthy opponent. He might just ask her out after the game. Left. Return. Right. Return. Left. Return. Right corner--and away. No point. Randi's serve. And so the game wore on, neither combatant yielding. Finally, the score was 20:18, Randi's serve, game point. She slammed the oinker down on the table and fired it straight for the right corner. Charley lunged and whacked the pig on the ham. He lurched back to position just in time to see the curly tail disappear over the other end of the table. He had lost. LOST! She must have cheated. He would NEVER ask her out now.

"Good game," she said, grinning, "want to go for a root beer?"
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https://dreamsandnightmaresmagazine.blogspot.com/2025/01/011525b.html

A few updates on writing and publishing. Latest Dreams & Nightmares is out!
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I did not remember, if I ever knew, that John W. Campbell, that bastion of hard science fiction, published a story* in 1952 by A. Bertram Chandler, that hero of Space Opera, in which human werewolves battle alien bunny-hopping weretigers for mastery of the stars. It's a great story. Well worth re-reading my old magazines for gems like these.

*"Frontier of the Dark," September issue.
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Yolen, Jane, 2012, The Last Selchie Child, A Midsummer Night's Press (www.spdbooks.org; orders@spdbooks.org), Cover photograph by M. A. Mathews, ISBN-13:978-0-9794208-9-4, perfect bound, 66 pages, $14.95.

Jane Yolen is one of our venerable masters, both of fiction and poetry. She won the Rhysling award of the Science Fiction Poetry Association in 1993, as well as many other awards, some far more prestigious. Yolen was named SFPA Grand Master in 2010. It is always a pleasure to open one of her books for the first time. The Last Selchie Child is a collection of fairy tales retold as poems, 36 of them, including Cinderella, Sleeping Beauty, Beauty and the Beast, and Little Red Riding Hood, just to name four.

I lied already. The first part of the book is a group of poems about stories and storytelling. From “Story”:

You shape a tale
To fit your mind.

And so it goes,
In re-creation,
Mouth-to-ear
Resuscitation,

Several poems deal with the legends of people who can be seals or seals who can be people. There is plenty of room for sorrow and betrayal in a situation like this. From “The Selchie's Children's Plaint”:

She leaves us then, without a word
wading into her future.
It hurts like a knife
skinning us as we watch her go.
We were the ones
who were to dive into another life.

Some of these poems look at fairytale stories from new perspectives. Instead of the omniscient narrator, we see things from the point of view of the woman, the child, the prince. This is indeed a fruitful kind of reversal, pointing out the dark underbelly or ludicrousness of the traditional versions of these stories. But sometimes the shift in perspective shows us more. “Knives” reveals more horror in Cinderella than the by-now familiar idea of what happens after the wedding. Cinderella might not have been the naïve young thing most of us thought.

I spoke to the prince in that secret tongue,
the diplomacy of courting.
he using shoes, I using glass,
and all my sisters saw was a slipper,
too long in the heel,
too short at the toe.
What else could they use but a knife?

Fair young things seem to wait so long for something to happen, in fairy tales. How long is too long? From “Tower”:

I have found
the small barred window,
where I sing each morning
to any passing prince.
Be he large or small, handsome or plain,
I will have him.

After a while, you wait your life away, and anything at all becomes enough. How much becomes plain, although unstated, in a clear-eyed reading of fairy tales? The most interesting thing about this book, for me, is that familiar fairy tales are re-imagined in several different ways in different poems. We don't end up with simply two perspectives, but three, four, and perhaps others that we can imagine for ourselves, now that the way has been shown.

The last section of the book consists of a group of poems about “truth,” which is to say that the stories we have been told are wrong, wrong, wrong. Indeed they are! From “Women's Stories”:

Job's wife had her own story.
Lot's pillar of salt cried tears
indistinguishable from her eyes.
Who invented a glass slipper
never had to dance.

It might be needless to say I think you should buy this book. But just in case, I'll say it. You really should buy this book. You won't be sorry.

Bloodless

Dec. 23rd, 2024 01:03 pm
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Rathbone, Wendy, 2013, Unearthly: the collected poetry of Wendy Rathbone, Eye Scry Publications, 170 p., contact wrathbone@juno.com for information. E-book: $2.99 for the kindle from Amazon.com; $2.99 pdf from http://www.fanzinesplus.com/html/unearthly.htm.


Unearthly is an e-book, a reprint of seven out-of-print chapbooks published between 1994 and 2005. Only one poem in this collection is truly new, but unless you have been a dedicated collector of Wendy Rathbone's poetry, you can't have read all of these:

Moon Canoes, published by Dark Regions Press, 1994
(Im)mortal, published by Shadowfire Press, 1996
Scrying The River Styx, published by Anamnesis Press, 1999
Autumn Phantoms, published by Flesh and Blood Press, 2000
Dreams of Decadence Presents, published by DNA Publications 2002
Dancing in the Haunted Woodlands, published by Yellow Bat Review, 2003
Vampyria, published by Eye Scry Publications, 2005


Reading these poems is a sensory experience. They evoke a myriad colors, scents, even pure emotions. Rathbone's work is so rich you have to read a poem again and again to understand what it's about. When you do, you often find the poems are images, or series of images, pictures in words of eerie settings and situations. If these poems were abstract paintings I would hang them in my house. Rathbone's poetry carries the reader through dreamworlds that are intimate, beautiful, ghostly, and sharp-edged. Here there be monsters, though some are the kind to whom one is wont to surrender (whether this is wise is debatable).


From "Vampire Poet"

Fling me the snowflakes
from your eyes
I’ll save them in some
winter land
You’ll never know this is happening
how I watch your naked chest move


Some of Rathbone's monsters are more like old friends, and draw explicitly on tales we've long known.. From "Child’s Letter Found In An Old Toy Box (Written in silver crayon)"

I avoid Neverland’s mirrors, now,
too ancient to look upon, really,
just a ghastly old, old boy.
But don’t be sad, Wendy.

There are themes, common threads running through many of these poems. Seasons and months, especially autumn and winter. Immortality, vampires, creation and destruction. Especially vampires!

I never think of Rathbone as a science fiction writer. Her work is moody; it broods over impossible landscapes like the ghosts of Lovecraft's Elder Things, hovering over their cyclopean Antarctic city. Nevertheless, sfnal themes and settings can be found in her work.

From "Dreaming a Star-Farer to Life"

I watch for his breath
upon the frozen tongue of sky
that arcs my tiny seam of sight.
Within the tundra of galactic
continents, among the sparks
of constellations flickering


These poems take place in unreal worlds: outer space, undefined regions beyond reality, dreams. Sometimes one awakens from the dream. Some of these poems employ tropes from Celtic tales of the fae.


From "The Vampyre Cathedral"

One boy dreamed
of a goblin
who owns time.
He woke aged
and weeping.


There is simply no way to encapsulate Rathbone's oeuvre. And at less than $3 for the whole delightful collection, it's a crime to leave it on the table. So to speak.
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Wiloch, Thomas, 2006, Screaming in Code, Naked Snake Press, 6 Rain Tree Lane, Pawleys Island, SC 29585, softcover, perfect bound, 56 pages. Artwork by Thomas Wiloch and Donna Taylor Burgess.

This is a very pretty chapbook: lots of illustrations, nice cover stock with lots of color; too bad it doesn't have an ISBN and the price is not listed in the book. However, there is a website: www.nakedsnakepress.com (the URL is not listed in the book either). Presumably, all is made clear at the website.

This is a book of prose poems that warns the reader against overdoses of its powerful medicine. There is always a risk when one indulges in hyperbole. The best of these stories are like western koans, but some are just not that profound.

Here are some snippets. I don't really want to quote more, because the individual prose poems, which total 34 in number, are generally shorter than half a page. "Tiny white skulls" can be our friends. "You can do anything you want with tiny white skulls." "Tell me I'm wrong": "the human body is composed primarily of empty space." "The locomotive museum" from which the locomotives escaped one day, "some rearing up like great wild horses... and still others as giddy as children."

On the one hand, some of the stuff was just silly, and not on purpose. In "the trunks" the protagonist opens a trunk in order to start packing for a trip, only to find a smaller trunk inside. He opens that trunk and, you can guess the rest. But here's my question. Why did he keep on opening trunks when they got so small he needed a microscope to see them? Why not just pack all of the smaller trunks inside the next larger one, and take the biggest, now empty, on the trip? Sure, there's a mystery to be solved, but you're going to skip a trip to Europe because of it?!

On the other hand, I like the idea of the man who lives in a box. It turns out he lives in a box so large that the entire universe fits inside. If the box is this big does it matter? I think it does.

On the gripping hand, this might be a good book to have on the bedside table for those mornings when you wake up two hours early and can't go back to sleep. You might learn something useful reading a couple of these.
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Watts, JS, 2012, Songs of Steelyard Sue, Lapwing Publications, lapwing.poetry@ntlworld.com
http://www.freewebs.com/lapwingpoetry/, ISBN 978-1-909252-02-8, 24 p. This is a print publication, but I reviewed a PDF file. £10.00 plus shipping, or $22 from Amazon.


Songs of Steelyard Sue is a small book of 12 poems about Steelyard Sue, a metal inheritor of our world. Two of the poems were previously published elsewhere. I gotta tell ya, as I was reading this book I kept silently saying to myself, “that couldn't happen,” or “that violates the laws of physics” and so on. I fully intended to not write a review. But somehow I couldn't do that. I couldn't dislike these poems. J. S. Watts didn't write a science fiction book, in which robots are supposed to do only those things robots plausibly could do. Even though it is about a robot. This is, at its most scientific, perhaps a science fantasy book. Of course it is really about a lonely woman, the last person on earth, if a robot who admits that she has no heart and no human soul is a person. Whatever she isn't, she is, at least, a gardener, even in the absence of plant life.


_I bent the wire
in pretty shapes
and made flower faces
from black rubber scraps.
I saw a bird there, once,
perching on a sonic shell._

(From “Steelyard Sue Plants a Garden”)


Sue is alone, the Earth is nearly a lifeless place, but she isn't completely alone. Metaphorically speaking, there are a few knocks on the door:


_It sat there for two days,
stone-like, good as dead,
until, on the third day,
I found the stone moved,
the toad gone,_

(from “Toad”)


And isn't that a hell of a thing? Did Jesus come back in the form of a toad? And Steelyard Sue, a seeker, but not human and not having a soul, didn't recognize him? Or is this allusion really just a cheap joke? I suspect the latter. The thing is, I like Sue. I like her voice. She doesn't know much about our world, but she's trying. She doesn't know how things are supposed to work, but she has a very strong sense of right and wrong, and wants to do right. The writing is lyrical and the story is a real human one, about an amateur self-taught archaeologist marooned all alone on a desert island 26,000 miles in circumference.


_Sometimes I go to church
three or four times a day. There are so many abandoned here,
churches, that is,_

[and]

_I once found a place,
multi-layered, open to the sky,
where rows and rows of cars
waited their turn in silence_

(From “Steelyard Sue Goes to Church”)


Sue doesn't really know what a church was, and she can't tell a church from a parking garage, but she knows they were important to us in a non-tangible way. She tries to experience them the way we did. She is doomed to failure, and she knows that, but she isn't anything by herself. She exists in relationship to our vanished species.


_A woman of many parts, all man-made
and without a human soul,
not even the soft-skin touch of polished chrome.
I make no concession to organic,
the full moon has no pull upon me.
All I am is corners, sharps and rust:_

(From “The Last Lament of Steelyard Sue”)


Sue is a post-human commentator, solitary, strangely knowledgeable about some of our affairs, yet profoundly ignorant of others. She isn't independent of us. She was not made by us, but she was assembled out of what we left behind. The funny thing about Sue, is that she is also a sort of bridge. A bridge between the human world and a robot world about which she knew nothing, because it came to be when she was already gone. Exactly how this happened is not explained either, but it does provide an explanation for the book. The poems are what the robot world knows about Sue. We don't learn much about the robot world, but we do get the sense that there is a real society, developed at some future time with no direct reference to us. Instead, the robots refer back to a legendary past in which Sue was the only inhabitant.

Jane Who?

Dec. 19th, 2024 02:42 pm
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Virtes, S. C., 2008, Improbable Jane: 3 odd odysseys: perfect bound, cover by Scott Virtes, www.samsdotpublishing.com, $8, 70 pages.

This book contains three long poems entitled "Jane Doe discovered," "The improbable notebook of Jason V--," and "Cougar village."

"Jane Doe discovered" is a story of secret hospital prisons, chemical torture, you know the drill. It is very well written and engaging. However, I wondered why. Why was Jane Doe stuck in her predicament? Maybe the explanation was in there, but I didn't see it.

"The improbable notebook..." is about a crazy inventor. Or maybe he's not so crazy. If you make a world-shattering discovery, should you tell people?

The last of this trio of poems is written in the style of a Native American folk tale.
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Bus Stop, John Francis Haynes and The Long Trip, Dainis Bisenieks, 2006, Hilltop Press, ISBN 0 905262 38 7, distributed by www.bbr-online.com/catalogue. $4/£1.75. Not paginated, but 16 pages total. Saddle stitched with a color photocopy cover on front and back. Both covers are by Gunter Wessalowski. This slim volume has the appearance of a typical small-press chapbook, except it is laid out like an Ace double; one poem is right side up beginning in the front of the book, whereas the other poem is upside down and progresses from the back. Or the other way around.

Of course the whimsy in this book is European (British and German) and Pennsylvanian (which is east for me). I like the covers. The reproduction could be better, but it's quite acceptable. Let's look at "The Long Trip" first. Stark geometric objects, organic forms, and bleak emptiness on the cover go well with this poem about an interstellar voyage. The poem only hints at the outcome of the voyage and says nothing about the long trip's purpose. The purpose of the poem, if I may presume to claim that I understand the author's intent, is to show us the dark side of voyaging. If you don't know where you're going, or why, and you don't know where you are when you stop on the way, and you don't know what you are looking at when you make that stop, what does that say about the trip, you, and the universe? For Bisenieks, the universe is just this sort of unwelcoming and unfathomable place. In a few pages, he takes us there.

_The rainstorm ends, and the clouds draw away.
The captain gives orders: continue the trip.
Back into a world of neither night nor day
We follow our shadows into the ship._

Turn the book over. "Bus Stop" has a lush cover full of organic forms: plants, animals, and things that could be one or the other. There is a moon, which might be living, a spaceship, and a plethora of odd alien life forms. Open the book and you step into a dream. It doesn't seem to have a direct relationship to the cover, but by the time you get to the end I think you'll see the connection. The protagonist in the poem (I hesitate to call him that because he doesn't make any progress) is trapped in what he believes to be a malignant dream. Alien landscapes and creatures are a dime a dozen in this dream, if dream it is. It reminds me a little of a dream I once had. The dreamer in this poem tries to escape back to reality, but he cannot. There is no explicit resolution, but the reader is left with some questions. Was it really a dream? Could it be reality? And if it's a dream, why? Drugs, the influence of mind-altering machines, bad luck? We don't know any of these things, but we do get a glimpse into mystery.

_The howling wind screamed around his ears.
Through chattering teeth and half-shut eyes he peered
At walls of ice and two pale, limpid suns.
It really must be time to wake up now_

Certainly these two poems go together like left foot and right. They could be pages torn from books in a library of SFnal dementia. Steve Sneyd, science fiction poetry's historian and publisher of Hilltop Press, knows how to pick them.
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Tentchoff, Marcie Lynn, 2007, Sometimes While Dreaming: Cedar Rapids, IA, Sam's Dot Publishing, 83 p.

Sometimes While Dreaming is a chapbook of poetry written by Marcie Lynn Tentchoff. Thirty-seven of the 48 poems in this collection are new. Eight ethereal illustrations by Marge B. Simon accompany them. At her best, Tentchoff is able to put the reader in touch with the souls of some pretty strange people and other beings. There is plenty of her best in this chapbook.

One of my favorites is "Fallen," in which a case of mistaken identity has more than casual significance.

Some other girl found him there,
And drew him down to her,
Gently freeing each limb from the thorns.
It wasn't me.

What I like best about this poem is that I was led to empathize with the protagonist (someone I could be, aside from the gender difference), but put in a situation I could never be in, and, while reading the poem, I felt that I was there.

I also enjoyed "Crow counting," with its mounting sense of impending doom for the naïve narrator.

The road grew long, I asked his name,
but he would only smile at me,
and stroke my cheek with feathers gleaned
from one of our last seven birds.

This poem has roots in the old ballads of betrayal and death that were so popular with folksingers of the 1960s and earlier.

From "Displaced":

Sometimes she remembers
coming from some other place
where song and dance
were food and drink

This poem is a short poignant view into the heart of someone lost who is forgetting that she is lost. Subtle stories, sketched in allusion, hints, and sly clues, these are Tentchoff''s hallmarks. One is sometimes left knowing the feel of what has happened, or why, when the specifics are uncertain.

"Other hungers" is another take on the Persephone myth, supposing, as others have done, that she's content or happy underground.

Do you miss the dim,
bone-filled freedoms
of the underworld

And what if she does? Would anything change? Tentchoff asks a lot of questions here and she hints at the answers, we are not sure perhaps if we interpret those hints correctly.

In other poems we explore the lives of werewolves, Cinderella, dryads, and others. In "Rootbound" (Clever title, by the way) a dryad shows us what her life is really like:

Away from this, the prison of my bark,
My anguish flows and rages through my sap,
And burns the brightest sun to bitter dark,
That they stride free while I rot in this trap.

Tentchoff reminds us that we are all prisoners, and I don't think she says this anywhere in Sometimes while dreaming, but it's implicit. Some prisons we cannot escape, but for many of us the bars are inside our heads.

When Tentchoff is dreaming, strange and wonderful things result. Myths are retold in enchanting and unexpected ways and new myths are created with their own history stretching out from them into the imagined past. Sometimes while dreaming contains many more poems I am tempted to excerpt for you, but come on. Just buy the book. I'm very sure you won't regret it.
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Snyder, Lucy A., 2009, Chimeric Machines, introduction by Tom Piccirilli, cover by Ursula Vernon, Creative Guy Publishing, www.creativeguypublishing.com, 85 p, perfect-bound pb, ISBN-10 1-894953-55-X; ISBN-13 978-1-894953-55-9, $10.95.

This small book contains three dozen poems. Most were previously published in various periodicals. . The book is divided into seven parts with titles like "Quiet places" and "Dark dreams." Some groups of poems are highly integrated (one set tells a single story from various perspectives), while others merely share themes.

Tom Piccirilli tries hard in the introduction to sell the book. I think most people who read the introductions to small-press books have already bought them. Still, Tom's clever prose provides excellent quotations for marketing, which is a traditional use of book introductions. Most people don't read introductions, anyway. I'm that way, but this one is entertaining. Don't skip it.

I really like the cover. I don't think it was painted for Chimeric Machines, but it's very appropriate (to the title). The machine in the illustration is made of parts that don't seem like they belong together: a skull, gears, wood (?), and more. It is a chimera: something cobbled together from disparate parts. The poems are not. These poems are not frankensteined out of mismatched bits. They are seamless wholes, moving windows into the mind of humanity. They are sharp and hard, but compassionate in their way. To end abuse one must first recognize it, and Chimeric Machines is halfway there. There is humor here, too, but chiefly there is intensity and piercing insight. These poems are mostly pretty short. Most fit on single pages. It doesn't take many words to make a point if you do it well.

One of my favorites is "Home for the holidays," a chilling poem that turns everything on its head at the end and makes you read it again. I also particularly like" Prometheus." I haven't seen the legend treated just this way before, which is one of the things I like about it. Let's just say that this version would not be printed in a book for children.

My pain's become an impure joy;
I wait for you on this windswept rock,
the granite and iron hard against my flesh.
My blood quickens when I hear your call.

From "Uncanny Valley Girl,"

Your polymer skin is smooth as bisque,
your eyes a ceruleun unseen in Nature.
Swains may recoil from servo whir and whisk,
the deus of your machina's my favorite feature.

Atypical in possessing both rhyme and meter, and also in its light tone, "Uncanny Valley Girl" is one of a few exceptions to this book's rule. A pause for breath, a shift in mood, and proof that Snyder's skill encompasses a greater breadth in form and tone than readers might think after reading the first few poems.

What else? The "Crete, Kentucky" poems combine to yield a harrowing look at a suffering family. "Dumb" is a dip inside academia's seamy side. Multiple layers of meaning, some turning on juxtaposition of title and text, some on line vs line alternative uses of versatile words, are the rule in these poems about cruelty, bad choices, bad luck, and harsh reality. It's not all grim. Humor, yes, and beauty too, in "Ocean," for example, in which a trip to the beach doesn't stop with the water. I enjoyed the diversity of this thin, themed book. I see a lot here. In fact, what I don't see are chimerae!

Although I can't understand why Snyder called this book chimeric that doesn't inhibit my appreciation of it. Aficionados of dark poetry and Snyder fans will be glad they snapped this one up.
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Schweitzer, Darrell, 2008, Ghosts of past and future: selected poetry, The Borgo Press, an imprint of Wildside Press, www.wildsidepress.com, perfect bound. Cover by Thierry Vivies. 125 p, ISBN 978-1-4344-8204-4.

Poems in this book were first published between the years 1992 and 2008. A quick glance through the five pages of acknowledgments indicates that at least two of these poems are first published here. The original appearances of the remainder cover a lot of territory, ranging from Weird Tales to Asimov's, and many lesser-known venues. The book ends with explanatory notes about some of the poems. In the interests of full disclosure I should mention that I first published a few of these in Dreams and Nightmares.

I love the way the book is organized into thematic sections. By far the longest is called "Intimations beyond mortality." This is followed by "The matter of Britain," "Post-Homerica," and "Yesterday's tomorrows." All of these sound intriguing, don't they? They do if you are at all familiar with Darrell's work.

These are powerful poems. In each we find the personal immediacy of the best mainstream poetry, but in the context of our boundary-pushing literature. And who doesn't prefer a gripping and thought-provoking poem about death, and what comes after, to a similar poem about cracks in the sidewalk or spring flowers?

"We outnumber the living, you know.
For all you desperately try to outbreed us,
the fruits of your loins inevitably
switch sides in the end."

That is the beginning of "We dead outnumber the living, you know." Nothing we haven't heard before, but the poem takes off from there like a fighter jet from an aircraft carrier. By the time you get to the end, the aircraft carrier is at the bottom of the sea, if you will allow such a ridiculous metaphor.

From "Song of a forgotten god"

"With Moon-pale hair and beard grown dark,
I rage and run with the beasts,
the perilous father of all that I meet,
dancing, dancing against the Sun."

Many of these poems are imbued with the qualities of legend, even those that are not explicitly about the stuff of legend, as this one is.

From "Is their survivor's guilt in heaven?":

"a parent, with just one bad habit,
a little careless at the end,
now screaming in flames forever
while we, the lucky ones,
are supposed to sit back, strum our harps,
and enjoy ourselves?"

Do you suppose the entrance requirements are really as strict as we have been told?

I want to particularly mention the section about Britain, which is really about King Arthur. Schweitzer has been worrying at the question of Arthur like a dog with a very large bone. He has attacked the question of just what is the Arthurian legend all about from several different directions, and for all I know he's not done with it yet. Arthur has inspired a lot of writers and there is plenty to share. Still, there is insight here, worth reading even if you have read tons of what has been written before.

Moving past Arthur, perhaps our most famous legendary hero, Schweitzer is hard on heroes in general. This includes space opera heroes as well as legendary ones. It even includes those who make heroes. From "Near the end of the epic":

"the villainous bards,
who turned this enterprise into an epic,
left that part out, not deigning to mention
the thousands of lives washed away like ashes"

Schweitzer is good at seeing beyond the surfaces of the old stories. He turns them over and shows us the underbellies, moldy and raddled by bugs, that we should have known were there. But we didn't know, because we didn't think about it. Now it will be hard to forget.

You know, I really can't do justice to this book by quoting a few lines from this poem and a few lines from that poem. And it doesn't help to make the review longer. They are all so good I want to give them all to you. But that wouldn't be fair to the poet or the publisher. So, for the moment you have to make do with a few snippets. I suggest you visit Wildside on the web and limber up your PayPal account. You won't regret it.

Why hasn't Schweitzer ever won a Rhysling award? I could answer this question, but most likely all of my answers would be wrong, or at best half-truths. But he must get a winner someday. Quick! Buy this book and read it, so you can say you knew his work way back when.
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Book review


Schimel, Lawrence, 2007, Fairy Tales for Writers: a Midsummer Night's Press, New York, ISBN-13 978-0-9794208-0-1, $6.50 (US), a small perfect bound book with glossy card-stock two-color cover, 30 pages.

13 poems, 12 original. The theme of this book is, perhaps, obvious from the title. These poems all relate in some way to well-known fairy tales and to the writing life.

This is the first book published by Schimel's new press and it looks nice. It's very small; it might get lost on a bookshelf, even one full of chapbooks. I didn't measure it, but it looks like it's about 5 ½ inches tall by 4 inches wide or thereabouts. Also, it isn't for everybody. I think it will really only appeal to writers and perhaps also to fans of modern treatments of fairy tales. Still, the poems are excellent. Schimel is a very good writer and he knows what people are about, whether or not they are writers. His points about humanity are reinforced by his choices of fairy tales. I don't generally like to read about writing or writers; it seems too intellectually incestuous, but this book is different. The poems are music, and I have to recommend "Fairy Tales for Writers."

Here are a couple of examples. It's hard to know which to choose. How about "The Little Mermaid"?

She gave up her voice for him,
learning to mimic the minimalist style
he advocated in his workshops.

Or maybe "Cinderella"

He couldn't find her anywhere.
He asked everyone, tried to track her down:
Who was her agent?
Where had she published?

"The Ugly Duckling"

the uncertainty, the constantly having to tell
the kid to get his nose out of a book and go out
and play like normal children should.

By turns chilling, melancholy, and even uplifting, these poems pack a punch. Don't miss out.
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Pollack, Rachel, 2009, Fortune's lovers: a book of tarot poems: A Midsummer Night's Press, www.amidsummernightspress.com, ISBN-13 978-0-9794208-4-9, $9.95, small-format perfect-bound paperback, 42 pages.

Most of Rachel Pollack's 30 books are nonfiction and half are about the tarot. I have not read any of them. She has won awards for both fiction and nonfiction books. No other poetry books are listed inside my copy of Fortune's lovers. This book contains 12 poems. No prior publication credits are given, so I'm guessing they are all new.

Of course the tarot includes more than 12 cards; there are more than 12 of the major arcana. "Fortune's lovers" samples the tarot, it does not encompass it. Most poems refer to particular cards, but the penultimate poem, "Tarot pi," is the result of an exercise in which words relating to major arcana are assigned to numerals and replace the first hundred digits of the irrational number pi. The result is interesting, but any meaning it contains is of the same order as the faces that our minds insist on finding in any complex nonpatterned image.

Another oddity about this book is that the first and last poems have the same title: "Fool." The last poem is a sort of postscript or conclusion in the form of a wise saying about "the gate."

This leaves poems 1 through 10, which refer to or spin off from major arcana, but do not describe them. In "Fool" a group of New York tarot devotees meet to consider the meaning of this card

of "fou," madness, how
the bright beautiful boy at the birth of the world
was once a schizophrenic homeless guy

As always, a demonstration is far more instructive than just talking. As this poem demonstrates.

"Magician" is not about Merlin, although there is a poem about Merlin in this book. Hermes, father of alchemy and grandfather of chemistry, is the magician here.

"High priestess" is about the job of high priestess, and poses the question: is that a job you want? (Trick question.)

She can only stare,
and look impressive,
and hope they don't expect
some blessing or curse or detailed instructions for
making candles or killing goats

In "Emperor" a lesson is learned. 'Do as I say, not as I do' is all very well, but how many children follow this dictum anyway?

Her father, the all-powerful King,
dropped his pipe and newspaper,
and set her on his lap, where he
wiped away her tears.

The place of the tarot in the modern world may be a small and dusty corner, but in this book Rachel Pollack has done her best to show how these ancient symbols are relevant still. You could do far worse than to take Fortune's lover as your companion on a journey to explore the mythic roots of everyday life.
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A poetry reading has been approved for Mid-City Microcon (Baton Rouge, Saturday, Feb. 8). How many of you can say that you are likely to participate? I don't need a firm commitment at this time. I'm also going to allow fiction if you only read a few minutes worth. I need to let the library know about how much time the reading will encompass, so I need to get an idea about how many people are likely to be participating.

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Paper Crow, volume 1 issue 2 (Fall/Winter 2010), bi-annual, $5/issue or $8/year. Saddle stitched, card-stock cover, 32 p. ISSN 2152-9116. www.electrikmilkbathpress.com.

I don't often review periodicals, but this is not the first time. Paper Crow is a fairly new genre poetry zine, and it's very nice. In fact, about several of the poems in this magazine I thought "she should have submitted that one to me!" 26 poems by 25 authors in 32 pages and they are all good.

This is a passionate magazine. There are poems about love, lust, and death, and in no case are these subjects treated lightly. These poems have weight, and it's not ballast.

From "The diluted soldier," by Marge Simon

Sometimes he sees in perpetuity
memories of a lover,
returns to it again and again,
something that can't be soiled by words,
even those in confidence a moment or so

From "In the garden with my lover," Pam Marin-Kingsley

The tulip shoots emerge,
force their way upward.
Their tips in bud as straight
and pink as his.

There is a commonality among the poems in this magazine. Things are not always as they seem. In fact, they usually aren't. As Jane Gwaltney says in "The Lady and the Mirror"

Quietly, she punishes her knuckles,
not once, but twice – positive that
illusion is all it's cracked up to be.

One thing I find very interesting about Paper Crow is that the poems are all very personal. They seem so full of emotion, most of them are about relationships, and it certainly seems like they must have been very close to the hearts of their authors. Why, then, is the name of the editor printed nowhere in the magazine? Perhaps this is an oversight. If not, I can't make out the purpose, but it's certainly unusual.

Never mind all that, though. We don't really read poetry magazines for the editor anyway, we read them for the poems. If you're thinking about what to pick up next, Paper Crow is a good choice. You won't have to give up anything, except perhaps your equanimity.

From "Drinking," by Brian Rosenberger

Forget the cab, call the hearse
brunette blind dates the coroner now
Both running on empty

I've quoted a few poems; I can't quote them all. Other names you will recognize include Donna Burgess, Marcie Lynn Tentchoff, James S. Dorr, Jaime Lee Moyer, and Bruce Boston. I think in every case Paper Crow has gotten close to the best these poets have to offer. But enough of this, go order the magazine already.
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McBride, Lish, 2010, Hold me Closer, Necromancer, Henry Holt, 343 pages, hardback, "young adult," ISBN 978-0-8050-9098-7.


This is Lish McBride's first published novel, and I don't think she quite has the young-adult thing down. No matter how much two characters are attracted to each other, in a young-adult novel they don't have sex on screen and outside of marriage. At least, not in the United States. That said, I would unhesitatingly give this book to any young adult I know who likes fantasy fiction.

The title is definitely odd. It's one of those titles about which, when you get to the relevant part of the story, you say to yourself something like "okay, I can see that, but it's still an offputting title." Other adjectives might include misleading, suicidal (as in the book might commit commercial suicide because of the title), and other such derogatory terms.

The cover, apparently by Rich Deas (I say "apparently" because he is listed as the jacket designer), is pretty nice. And I find the whole idea of the book enchanting. Powerful evil person trying to kill innocent young and ineffectual protagonist. This is a standard plot situation for a young-adult story. Except the protagonist is a necromancer. And he doesn't know it. It adds a whole new level to the requirement typical of such books that he find himself. Sam is a likable fellow, and so are his friends. As the book goes on the reader discovers that there is a lot going on beneath the still waters of Sam's surface personality. Yet I never felt cheated. I never felt that the author had concealed something important that I really should have known. ("You didn't think I would notice that he had two heads?")

McBride explains how necromancy works (it's not what you think), how werewolves work, how ghosts work, but not everything in this story is explained. Spirit animals, for instance. Why do people have them? What do they do? Are they real animals or something more? I assume that some of this will be revealed in a sequel. And there is going to be a sequel, out about a year after this one.

Dare I mention Patricia Briggs? I dare, I dare. The magical systems are not the same, but something about McBride's world is reminiscent of Briggs' werewolf and fae universe. The book reminds me also of some of Tim Powers' novels. The protagonists have similar personalities. There's no excessive drinking or excruciating and prolonged pain, as is inevitable in a Powers book. But Sam would have felt natural in "Declare." He's better off in McBride's hands.

Not that there isn't dramatic tension in "Hold me closer, necromancer," and the kind of violence that is inevitable when powerful magic users think only of themselves. But I think the level of violence is appropriate for a horror-fantasy novel for young adults.Better keep a couple of cartoon books on hand just in case the person you give the book to doesn't finish it in the first session and has trouble going to sleep.

It's not easy to believe that this is Lish McBride's first published novel. I have read a lot of first novels. This one is suave and debonair by comparison. Assuming that McBride will improve her craft, as most writers do after the first book, I am really looking forward to the next one.

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